First sig with C4D's/Multi Renders/Blur

[Hydrox]

I was up late practicing with c4d's and such. This is what i came up with.

God of war theme. How can i improve of this guys? CC is welcome. PLEASE.

[Paid]

I was up late practicing with c4d's and such. This is what i came up with.

God of war theme. How can i improve of this guys? CC is welcome. PLEASE.

I like it. It isn't over brushed and you can actually see what is happening with the piece. I am sure Double D can give you some good CC. But, it looks good to me. You should try this in the SOTW.

[Asthetik]

It's pretty good, wouldn't mind if it was a little darker? Hmm, maybe you could add more background stuff. (The flames are good, just a little repetitive.)
but not bad buddy.

[Asthetik]

Also the text could fit the theme a bit more. (I'm really bad at text as you can see on all of my work.) Probably ask DD for some tips on that, or Prats.

[Hydrox]

Yeha, im probably gotta touch it up tonight..since i really like it.


might add a castle type thing..or other stuff from GOW.

EDIT-Added another.

[Hydrox]

I was up late practicing with c4d's and such. This is what i came up with.

God of war theme. How can i improve of this guys? CC is welcome. PLEASE.

I like it. It isn't over brushed and you can actually see what is happening with the piece. I am sure Double D can give you some good CC. But, it looks good to me. You should try this in the SOTW.

Didnt use any brushes. ^_^.

Defiantly gonna work on a SOWT entry now!.

[Paid]

I was up late practicing with c4d's and such. This is what i came up with.

God of war theme. How can i improve of this guys? CC is welcome. PLEASE.

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I like it. It isn't over brushed and you can actually see what is happening with the piece. I am sure Double D can give you some good CC. But, it looks good to me. You should try this in the SOTW.

Didnt use any brushes. ^_^.

Defiantly gonna work on a SOWT entry now!.

I understand you didn't use brushes in this. "Overly dont background" is what I was trying to convey :wink: